Thread:XMiRage/@comment-29246616-20160723145325

Hi there, I was impressed and grateful that you took to your time to translate all the chapters of the light novel. It has been a great time killer while I'm on duty in my camp. Hence, I would like to offer my help in editing.

Due to my inadequency in Japanese, I am not able to help in translations. However, I would like to assist in proofreading and amending the completed chapters which you had thankfully translated. By rearranging sentence structures and paraphrasing without changing the meaning, I wish to make the novel more exciting for readers like me who really like this light novel. So I am requesting for your permission to proceed, as a form of respect to your esteemed work. I will respect and follow your decision.

I have slightly edited chapter 11... but i will stop for now until i have gotten your permission.  