Talk:Day 191-200/@comment-25802199-20150705181552/@comment-87.61.179.225-20150706001002

Antichrist again ( had trouble singning in)

Hopefully this encourages someone to finish it, most of the work is done and I think it is readable, there was only one sentence I couldn't interpret, but there should be somebody who is better at understanding gibberish than me.

I also didn't know how to add hyperlinks, and I probably won't do it, I'm going on a nice vacation!!!

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Today is the first holiday after a long time

Even though I said it’s a holiday, the store is still open so everyone the Female Samurai  are still working, but because they work on shifts now, they are able to take breaks.

The same members are in charge of the Skeleton Spiders, and even though they don’t have a day off, they are also working on shifts, so that everyone has time off.

They each choose to spend their free time differently.

Some decided to train themselves as usual, while others decided to leave the  <span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">Royal Capital <span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;"> on [Skeleton Spiders]. There are even people who are doing side jobs and studying.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">By the way, I decided to go alone to the Labyrinth City.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">Of course, I challenged the [age of gods] dungeon called [spring water basin under a waterfall] again.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">Even though last time there was not enough time and I stopped at the first floor, I decided that I’m going to go to the deepest part this time even if it takes a few days.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">I can give out instructions through the ear cuffs to the reliable Kanami-chan who I left behind.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">Even if something happens and I can’t go immediately, Kanami-chan is there so I’m sure it’ll be fine.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">Because I distributed most of the innumerable detailed work to my subordinates, there isn’t a lot of work that has to be completed by me.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">I use the members who usually are useful, so that I can comfort myself, and I decided to take this time to challenge the [age of gods] dungeon alone is because the construction system I built is progressing without delay.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">and because the construction system I built is progressing without delay, I decided to take this time to challenge the [age of gods] dungeon alone.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">Challenging it this way, is just in order to rid myself from the dissatisfaction of only being able to eat one person who is of the [Hero] class during the coup.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">Even with the first-rate water hero meat right in front of me, I had to endure not eating him so that he could grow, but I don’t need to hold back here.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">After I finished preparing my equipment in the labyrinth town, I dived straight into the [spring water basin under a waterfall] dungeon

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">Like before, the decorations in the long and wide passages makes it look like the interior of a sacred temple with the floor submerged in cold ankle-deep water.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">Overall, the place gives of a majestic atmosphere, that makes it feel difficult to invade.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">The inside of the labyrinth gives off a pure and innocent feel, which makes it seem like a work of art.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">I advance alone, inside.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">While I’m casually advancing with a carefree attitude, dungeon monsters come flying at me without making a sound from the shadows that I just passed in the dungeon.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">Like before, I knocked down the “iolite elementals”. (blue gemstone)

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">The “iolite elementals” look like blue round orbs clad in running water which makes them look like flying slimes.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">Should I destroy the nucleus, scoop it out or can I kill it by just stripping off the running water covering it. The features are very similar to that of a slime.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">However, [iolite elementals] clearly win in terms of the danger involved in fighting one.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">It does not only have higher movement speed and physical strength, but it can also use ice magic from up to the third class as easily as breathing

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">The magic it uses is dangerous enough that the first shot it fires is likely to kill people.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">I catch the nucleus of the Iolite Elementals with my silver arm before it is able to do anything.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">The moment I pull out the blue round orb from the surrounding water, the water that is approximately 8cm in diameter, loses its binding force and falls to the ground, where it assimilates with the water on the floor.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">After seeing it, I ate the nucleus I caught.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">The nucleus’ texture and taste was just like a piece of slightly sweet candy. It might work well as a snack.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">Ability gained: [Purple Blue Fluid Iolite Liquid] Complete. (It’s an ability that makes you able to coat yourself with that funky liquid, I think it is useful, I would probably call it something like “Purple Iolite Fluid Armor” or Coating, that sounds nice)

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">Together with the ones I previously ate, I seem to have finally gotten a new ability.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">Because I killed 23 of them last time and ate them after putting them in the item box, it seems the 24’th gave me an ability.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">It seems learning can be done quicker than expected, I’m relieved. I immediately used it to see what it does.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">Apparently, [Purple Blue Fluid Iolite Liquid] allows the user to cover themselves with flowing water just like the Iolite element.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">The running water is like an armor that clings to the surface of my body when I use it and it seems to have very high tolerance against fire attacks. On the other hand, it seems to be weak against lightning attacks, but it still seems to be a useful ability.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">Currently, I’m in a good mood, so I went to hunt “Pincer armor” which possess a very hard carcass and “Daytime Varnish” which is a gigantic fish in succession. (I have no IDEA, seems like Aileri didn’t have one either, so I’ll leave this to the professionals…)

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">I didn’t stay on the first floor for that long, because I found the path to the second floor last time I came to the dungeon.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">After I found some treasure chests along the way and opened them, one-sidedly hunted a great number of dungeon monsters, avoided some powerful traps and passed other adventurer parties, not even one hour had passed.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">By the way, the structure of the second floor is no different from the first floor.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">The corridor of the second floor is a bit bigger than the one in the first floor and there are several monsters that didn’t appear on the first floor that appeared here.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">[Water Anacondas] are anacondas about 9 meters long and 30 centimeters wide, their bodies also release fluids that act as lubricants.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">[Evil War Man Frog] have muscular human bodies and exceed 2 meters in height. They have the head of a frog, webbed feet and carry a trident and a fishing net.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">[Mizumoridori] are light blue birds that fly at high speed. They have harpoon-like beaks and sharp claws. They don’t appear in passages, but instead in small rooms and they are about 60 centimeters long.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">These are the main ones in the dungeon because they are the ones that appear most often and gives off a dangerous feel. There are also others such as devil insects and reptiles.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">Although the monsters are larger and stronger than normal ones because they’re strengthened by the dungeon, I can still approximately kill them with a single blow and by overlapping abilities, they’re not at a level that has a chance to kill me.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">Nevertheless, capturing this dungeon is certainly going to be difficult.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">The chance of being attacked here is higher than in the caves of origin, it is also more time and energy consuming to kill the monsters with a single blow.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">Especially, the classic pitfall trap where a lot of [Water Anacondas] gather in makes the dungeon difficult to capture, it’s hard to spot because of its simplicity and the fact that once you’ve fallen in, it’s impossible to get out.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">In the first place, once a person falls in, the [Water Anacondas] immediately use their bodies to strangle and crush the person and due to the pit being covered by the lubricant made by the [Water Anaconda], climbing out is difficult as well.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">I may manage to ward off the [Water Anacondas] if I equip solid armor over my whole body, but getting out of the pit is a problem within itself another problem. (question: Isn’t there water in the pit, and if there isn’t why can’t he just fly out then, to narrow? Doesn’t make sense…)

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">By the way, when I stealthily looked around a corner of the passage, I witnessed the state of a party of adventurers who got stuck in a pit. (changed secretly to stealthily, who is he keeping the secret from, makes more sense if you use stealthily and looked into a corner? Could mean the pit is in the corner, but I changed it to around because you can’t really stealthily look into a corner with no cover.)

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">The unfortunate party members seem to have all fallen into the several meters deep square pit and they did not have the ability to get out.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">I only observed and did not help them because whatever happens in the dungeon is your own responsibility. The group of 5 that fell into the pit were all strangled to death by countless [Water Anacondas]

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">The ones in the backline immediately had their bones and equipment crushed, but the vanguard who wore magical armor from head to toe was able to hang in there for a while, but was also slowly crushed to death

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">The pit swallowed the five corpses whole and slowly covered itself again. It was slowly and carefully waiting for the next victims.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">After seeing that, I walked intentionally walked into the pitfall and fell too. (I think he means it was intentionally, so I added it, if people don’t like it remove it, but I think it makes more sense this way otherwise it would be disturbing if he seriously didn’t intent to fall down the hole after all he has been through “woops”.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">I could not miss the opportunity of hunting the high concentration of [Water Anacondas].

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">Normally, It would be a fight where I would be desperately struggling, but due to [Electromaster spreading through the anaconda’s body fluids, I was able to catch them all at once. Afterwards, I decided to solely eat them starting from the head. ( Aileri just used the Russian for this cuz names = headache…)

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">The power of [Electromaster] drastically rose the power of a lightning strike, but unexpectedly, the [Water Anacondas] did not instantly die. However, Since I was able to eat them alive, I guess the results are acceptable.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">It’s a good thing that they’re tasty alive.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">Ability gained: [Lubricant Body Fluids] Complete.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">Ability gained: [Water Snake Summoning] Complete

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin:12pt0cm;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"> 　二つほどラーニングできたので残りはお土産にとっておくとして.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:16px;line-height:26px;"> 　【潤滑体液】は【自己体液性質操作】と似たような部分があるが、単体で使用するよりもより高い効果を発揮できるようだし、そのままでもツルリとした肌は半端な攻撃を受け流してしまうようだ.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:16px;line-height:26px;"> 　それに敵に拘束されたとしても、これで簡単に抜け出せる可能性も高い.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:16px;line-height:26px;"> 　正直俺は身体を変形させれば使わなくても良いとは思うが、敵の意表を突くには役に立つだろう.

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:16px;line-height:26px;"> 　【水呼びの蛇】は、簡単に言えば雨乞いとか、周囲の水を集める、と言った効果がある.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:16px;line-height:26px;"> 　ミズズラアナコンダは体表の体液を維持するのにそこそこの水が必要で、それを補充する為に身につけたのだろう.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:16px;line-height:26px;"> 　これは上手くすれば砂漠地帯でも水脈などを発見できる可能性を秘めているので、使う場面は限定されるだろうが、あれば便利に違いない.

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:16px;line-height:26px;"> 　ほくほくしつつ、ミズズラアナコンダの中にある冒険者達の死体から装備品を回収して穴から飛び出る.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:16px;line-height:26px;"> 　既に死んでいるので後はダンジョンに喰われるだけなのだから、アイテム類はありがたく頂いた訳だ.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:16px;line-height:26px;"> 　死体はミズズラアナコンダ達が喰った後なので食指は動かず、落とし穴の底に放置している.

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:16px;line-height:26px;"> 　そんな感じでダンジョン攻略はそこそこ順調に進んだ.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:16px;line-height:26px;"> 　派生ダンジョンなどよりも遥かに広いので下に向かう階段を発見するのにはかなり苦労させられたが、一日で何とか五階まで降りる事に成功し、その最奥にある階層ボスが待ち受ける大部屋の直前にある安全地帯に到着している.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:16px;line-height:26px;"> 　夜食はダンジョンモンスターで賄いつつ、明日は朝一で階層ボス戦に挑む予定だ.

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:16px;line-height:26px;"> 　明日は早いので、十分な休息を得る為にさっさと寝た.

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="font-size:16px;line-height:26px;"> 　骸骨百足をアイテムボックスに入れていたので、肌寒いダンジョンでも温かく心地よい眠りである.

<p class="MsoNormal"> <span style="font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;font-size:12pt;line-height:19.5pt;">Editor’s notes:

<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst" style="margin:12pt0cm12pt36pt;text-indent:-18pt;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-         <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">Because I felt strange about just assuming what the writer meant in some of the sentences I had a hard time deciding what to write, without changing the meaning of a sentence, for example 2’nd from above “but because they are now working in shifts, so everyone will be able to take breaks”. I choose to edit it to, “but because they work in shifts now, they are able to take breaks.” Which I think sounds a little off, I would like to end it with “from time to time”, or write it was “scheduled breaks”, I think it would add to the understanding, but I couldn’t choose.

<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="margin:12pt0cm12pt36pt;text-indent:-18pt;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-         <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;"> “Overall, the place gives of a majestic and difficult to invade atmosphere.” I don’t know what is hard to invade, the atmosphere or the dungeon, I went, with the dungeon because that made more sense, but it could be wrong

<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="margin:12pt0cm12pt36pt;text-indent:-18pt;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-         <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">I also reversed some sentences because they sounded better reversed, hopefully it doesn’t take anything away from the text.

<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpMiddle" style="margin:12pt0cm12pt36pt;text-indent:-18pt;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-         <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">I found it irritating that the story shifted between past tense and present tense, and some of the monsters were described like there were more of them and others like there was a single one in the world(or at least the dungeon) I went with present tense with the main part, and everything that described the past was of course in past tense, and I chose to add “s” behind [Water Anaconda] and describe it as if there was more than one.

<p class="MsoListParagraphCxSpLast" style="margin:12pt0cm12pt36pt;text-indent:-18pt;line-height:19.5pt;background:rgb(25,25,25);"><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">-         <span lang="EN-US" style="font-size:12pt;font-family:Helvetica,sans-serif;">Sorry for all the notes it’s my first time editing and I want to know how people like to hear the story.

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