Talk:Day 71-80/@comment-85.138.101.168-20150529000051

This seemed like a really fun novel, and the first month was really great, but after rou became an ogre I think things just went downhill really fast. Everyone's way too OP, there's no challenge at all. Elven elite guards are weaker than ants, rank 5 magics that are strong enough to destroy an entire block don't even tickle him, several ancient items that are supposedly so rare even a small country couldn't get a hold of one are just given to him for nothing. Even in day 78 he introduces an impossibly strong guy with ancient items just for him to die in the next paragraph as if he was only a mere minion. What's the point?

It's really a shame, this could have been a pretty good light novel had the author worked as much on character building and story development as he did in world creation. I just hope that the manga doesn't follow this story and instead do it's own thing within this very interesting world.