Talk:Day 151-160/@comment-26361875-20150507195843/@comment-26011007-20150511233802

I cant find your comment day 164...did you edit it directly? anyway notes requested

what tense is 'that's why nobody ever do it' ??? nobody's ever done it, or nobody will ever do it, but past makes more sense....

you made 2 'the' instead of 'they' in the beginning, realizing not realising (American english), instead of 'her mood was enlightened' its more common to hear 'her mood had lightened' as lightened can be used as a verb and enlightened more refers to an epiphany or a realization of something big. Its a bit hard to describe. Otherwise just a bit of rewording and rephrasing to communicate some phrases' ideas better.