Thread:Dynamisx/@comment-4784862-20160118025007

First off, did you actually TRANSLATE it (as in, do you actually KNOW japanese), did you use the Translation Aggregator method (with Jisho.org and stuff as well), or did you simply pass it through Google Translate or something like it?

Secondly, if it's one of the first two...are you planning on doing more days?

If so, and you're using one of the first two methods, I'd like you to update the TL Progress page in the given area(s) with the Days you've COMPLETED (with the method you used), as well as when you start working on another day. This way people's work won't overlap. ^^

Thirdly, why did you put the people's names in the brackets like with 【Tomboy Princess】 instead of just using their names? Also, why did you replace those same brackets where they were USED in the raws with normal [] brackets?

The usage should honestly be 【】's where they're used in the RAWs, and NOTHING for actual names...unless the names are actually INSIDE OF SOMETHING.

For example, the ability learned lines should be like this:

Ability Learned: 【Ability Name】

Finally...I couldn't tell for sure at a glance, so I'm just going to make this suggestion in case you didn't do it. Please make sure to do one translated line per raw line. Don't combine separate lines into paragraphs/sentences, because that's not how the author did it.

At any rate, thanks for the help! :D 