Talk:Day 101-110/Day 109/@comment-108.12.44.211-20160112231744/@comment-124.83.16.225-20160113141412

Poor translation. In fact, the arrangement of the paragraphs is wrong. The sentence mentioning the strong walls should be placed in the same paragraph as the sentence that speaks about how the walls are there to prevent strong magical items from going out of the city without being regulated. The sentence after that part should be on another paragraph entirely. I can understand people rearranging sentences to make it easier to give a translation with proper grammar, but whoever did this translation shouldn't have just changed the structure of the paragraphs. I've noticed this on other days too.

There are also other mistakes on the translation of this day too. Like the entire last part. This day's translation will need to be rechecked and corrected.