Talk:Day 191-200/@comment-173.29.209.190-20150618165531

Day 192: Ooh! Thanks Mistelone! Since you're focusing on speed, it's understandable if you make a few more mistakes than you'd like. Here are some I caught:

"...focusing in the...." -> "...focusing on the...."

"...sold last night but there’s...." -> "...sold last night, but there are...."

"Haggling and getting haggled." This makes no sense. Haggling is the process of trying to get the best deal. You can't "get haggled" without an additional prepositional phrase to modify it. (E.g. I got haggled into buying an extra suit.) I suspect it's an issue of choosing a more appropriate word. That, or this just may be a case where the sentence needs to be rewritten to fit the English language. It could even be left out, and there would be no loss. The next sentence is essentially a repeat, after all.

"...keep watch of Female Samurai...." -> "...keep watch over Female Samurai...."

"...medical treatment and there...." -> "...medical treatment, and there...."

"There’s no problems...." Either "problems" needs to be singular or change "There's" -> "There are". Either fix works in English, but maybe the Japanese makes a distinction...?

"...skillfulness of one’s arm,...." arm -> arms

"...kinds of 【Jobs】 but...." -> "...kinds of 【Jobs】, but...."