Thread:Caudyr/@comment-29246616-20160723145009/@comment-4784862-20160730124147

I'm not certain there's a point in editing this, since there's no mention of who TL'd it so I suspect the quality...

However, I went through the day and checked what you mentioned anyway. I did change "hatable", but instead of loathsome or hateful, I changed it to detestable. They're referring to the humans as someone they hate/detest, not that the humans themselves are hateful.

I did the other changes, though maybe not in the way you expected...as well some others. To be honest, I'm fairly certain that a lot of those commas probably WEREN'T in the actual raw. Whoever translated this put way too many commas in, imo, heh.

I also (hopefully) fixed the formatting so it's easier to READ IT, as well.

To see the changes I made to it, click here.

One other thing to note, I think I'd honestly prefer it if you made a new topic when you are proposing editing changes. That way it's right at the top of the thread and it's easy for me to find it. ^^