Talk:Day 191-200/@comment-25802199-20150624040344/@comment-4784862-20150624115518

Did a quick glance over it and noticed a lot of grammatical errors (which others can fix), but it appears there may be at least a few translation errors, too. I fixed the glaring portions that I noticed, which were in the system messages at the end. Here's what you had:


 * [Character in the world of legends [Dark Legends] is an assistant of an important character, Seiji, fulfilled [Rank Up(evolution)]
 * [Condition "1" [Rank Up (evolution)] is satisfied, the title will be sent to [Merciful Father’s Light of Salvation]
 * [Character in the world of legends [Dark Legends] is an assistant of an important character, Gurukufu, fulfilled [Rank Up (evolution)]
 * [Condition "1" [Rank Up (evolution)] is satisfied, and the title will be sent to the [Guide of Severe Wickedness]]

The problem is that a lot of these messages were just not being displayed right. Here's how it should've been:

【World Psalms 【Legend of the Black Eclipse Demon】, 【Sub-cast】 character Seiji has ranked up.】

【Since condition "1" 【Rank Up】 has been cleared, title 【Merciful Father’s Light of Salvation】 has been awarded.】

【World Psalms 【Legend of the Black Eclipse Demon】, 【Sub-cast】 character Gurufu has ranked up.】

【Since condition "1" 【Rank Up】 has been cleared, title 【Rotting Guide of Severe Wickedness】 has been awarded.】

Basically, these are some important "terms" to remember when doing these parts:


 * 世界詩篇 = World Psalm(s) (not World of Legends)
 * 詩篇 = Psalm(s)
 * 黒蝕鬼物語 = Legend of the Black Eclipse Demon (not Dark Legends)
 * 副要人物 = Sub-cast (not all those words that are there, heh...though I did add "character" after it)
 * 存在進化 = Rank(ed) up (depends on usage ^^)

Now, I realize that the "rank up" and "Sub-cast" kanji didn't have rubi over them this time to indicate that they were those...but they had them over them previously, so that's what they should be called. ^^

If/when you get to doing ones with boss psalm (Frontier Psalms) messages, use Day(s) 162/163 for reference to show how it should be written out too, please. ^^