Talk:Day 231-235/Day 233/@comment-30714510-20161213205303

Okay, the translation in this Day is starting to become unintelligible (with all due respect). Because maybe it's just the sloppy author, but... let's see.

"That’s why today, I secretly create a subsidiary firm ≪ War Provisions ≫ -- labyrinth company ≪ Cor Hidor ≫ was founded.

However, while ≪ Serpent Heart ≫ was formed, there’s no store that’ll naturally form a base yet.". So... there's three names? "War Provisions" is a subsidiary from Parabellum (the shop, I take). And "Cor Hidor" is... a company in that specific city? So "War Provisions" is a subsidiary from Parabellum, but "Cor Hidor" is a "different"/hidden company?

And what's "Serpent Heart"?

And then " might create a clone as a replacement to hide the connection between ≪ Serpent Heart ≫ and ≪ War Provisions ≫ as much as possible.". What connection? Again, what's "Serpent Heart"?

The fact that none of those have a page does NOT help...

Also: "After all, it’s easier to directly engage in business discussion by using the clone. On top, it has the 【30% Purchase Price Decrease】 effect.". Why would using the clone making the business discussion any easier? And it's not the clone that has the discount ability: it's Rou. He might be able to give it to the clone AS WELL, but he still has it...

Anyway, I see from the translation notes that Champsy had these problems with the RAW as well, so I'm just gonna say that the author is becoming even more sloppy and lazy than he already was...