Thread:WhiteSamurai/@comment-23.241.241.197-20150320044629

I already understood that it was written by you, but as I have been reading it, the greatest differences that I have noted are that it is much less serious, its in a different setting, and has different yet similar attributes (e.g. warrior, powerful in life before) for the MC. Don't get me wrong, thats why I like your work. But it has similar content such as game background and that is why I would consider it a parody, because it seems to be an imitation of it.

Also, I think Re: Monster is only about half as stereotypical as you claim it to be. The MC is transformed into a goblin and was at first ruthless towards his fellow goblins and saw them as pawns. Humans soon become his enemy though, and he leads a monster mercenary group.

I won't tell you to make changements to Ant Tensei or how you write stories, but just some things that I observed while reading. This has been frequently stated already, but Ant Tensei does have a lot of details in it that seem unnecessary. This makes the structure and the plot, seem somewhat more complex than necessary. IMO, comedy was your best achievement in writing the story. At this point though, since im on Ch.6 idk what to make of it. It kind of became overly complex where some of the scenes kinda seem pointless, and its kinda weird because sometimes I can't tell if your still in 1st person narration like in the earlier chapters, and it seems that now, its mainly in 3rd person narration which oddly transitioned. I will though, still recommend it to my friends, since I think its an enjoyable read. 