Talk:Day 321-330/Day 326/@comment-32101925-20170525031823

Allow me the liberty to suggest an edit for the following quoted text(s) for ease of reading. Please let me know what you think of these changes. The suggested changes are  Underlined .

 1] ('Original')' ('"In a similar way, the triumphant blacksmith dwarf chief  does*  a daunting pose by folding his arms.

 1](Edit) ("In a similar way, the triumphant blacksmith dwarf chief   strikes *  a daunting pose by folding his arms. [Change made to word choice]



2](Original) ("The solid built physique of blacksmith dwarf chief, and the daunting pose by folding arms  did the thing as  a dignified presence, but the  innocence  glare and the sparkling from  his both  eyes are as pure as child's.")

2](Edit) ("The solid built physique of the blacksmith dwarf chief, and the daunting pose by folding arms  maintained  a dignified presence, but the  innocent  glare and the sparkling from  both his  eyes are as pure as a child's.")

[Change made to sentence structure for clarity] [Change made to word choice for more natural flow] [Change made to word order]



