Talk:Day 171-180/Day 171/@comment-185.36.149.161-20160224065829/@comment-26413397-20160323072717

I concur, having those phrases repeatedly appear makes the story feel extremely contrived, unnatural, and indeed makes Rou sound like a moron. Makes the story seem like a child fixing plot holes in his story of how he saved the world from the boggyman or an aweful author trying to unnaturally force in prevelant facts and events as he doesn't have the skill do insert them naturally.

I understand it's a little rude to say such, and a pain to fix, but those phrases deteriorate the quality of writing, and flow of the story, notably. Just my 2 cents, figured it was something to be noted, and no disrespect or ungratefulness intended.