Thread:Riverson24/@comment-32735374-20170925001306

Hi, I'm the one who last edited this part into the chapter before you edited it again.

Concerning Day 339, your edit on:

"The dead bodies of the 【Heroes】 within the range of its effect began to disassemble and emit a roar of dispersion. While observing the scene, I felt myself being swept away, but slightly push forward.

Although I am resisting, it's getting pushed further by [Voice Hero] and [Co Hero], who are going to add their voices together one by one as the destructive wave approaches. If they were alone, I can easily win, but the scale is different compared to the scale before. In close combat they can be killed more easily than anything, but in long range attacks the power increases proportionally compared with the number of people. With a simple calculation, it can become rather very troublesome."

My argument here is that: I honestly think that you got the edit "further by" and "add their voices together" wrong here. What I had in mind, when I edited it first, was that, looking at the context of the last paragraph (the bodies being disassembled), I had the impression the bodies were being "sucked" into the Voice / Co heroes and literally being added up to the pile, just like the "Dragon thing" before. Or else, the disassemble of the dead bodies wouldn't have any meaning, I think. I don't know whether it's me or you that got the right meaning, but that's what I got from translating it with what I got here (GT and dictionary), so I think it's worth arguing over it.

Well.. Thanks for your time,

I'll await your response on this issue.

BluBear~  