Talk:Day 71-80/@comment-25978970-20150107164943

... Well 72 is better... But i think i still need to fix it...

Remember what i said about reading it out loud first?

It needs to read and sound right, which implies that it actually sounds like what our protag would be saying.

Not to say that i don't apreciate the effort, the cleaning that was done here makes my job much easier than it was. I'll take it from here.

Give me ... 2-3 hours and i'll have my changes up( 72). Keep up the good work guys, if we were to wait for the ... Translator team, we would be waiting nigh two months before we got to day 80.

If its 2 months for the improved version, fine, but that doesn't prevent us from getting the generalized story first.

Now i'll call my little comments here for now,  I need to get working ;)