Talk:Day 141-150/Day 148/@comment-30714510-20161210200828/@comment-26601629-20190321235837

LOL, I've been resisting the urge to comment in your previous posts, but I just can't pass this one up. So far, translation or not, the author is not very good with creating believable plot elements or a story that flows. It's just a mashup of whatever the author feels like going with in any given day.

Take this day, like you say how does a minister have that much power??. Either they are operating on some different political structure (unlikely) or more likely, the author was just like, hmm, what to do with this day before the Hero tournament thingy, ah, let's have a colosseum event to show off this dude's strength, and then Viola, Aporou quite literally appears in the colosseum.

Lol just look how the whole situation was (not) described, Oh Yeah, this city has a colosseum (despite them going around touring the city on several days, and having one at his base, he never mentions it before until magically just now), then it proceeds to give compelling information about the colosseum, and then Also Yeah, I'm in here because one reason or the other, then proceeds to give an unrealistic cover reason. But then in aporou's words, it boils down to. The minister wants me here so I'm here, and that is the true reason for this day, replace minister with author and you have the full story. I was laughing so much at that top part.

Just like the other chapter. What can I do so spice up this boring. Oh yeah, a war happened today. The end. you just can't take the story seriously after a while