Talk:Day 111-120/@comment-216.21.162.107-20150707115512

There is a small portion at the start of day 120 whose translation needs to be verified as it currenty makes little sense.

The lines are:

There is also one of her more powerful abilities, [Intermediate Summoning: Undead], which allows her to magically call up twelve familiars.

Oh yes, by the way, [Intermediate Summoning: Undead] is an improved version of my own summoning ability [Lesser Summoning: Undead].

This ability comes from the blessing of [The God of the Underworld], a blessing Dhammi-chan has, the ability itself seemed quite useful.

With this, I think it’s possible to generate monsters I’ve already devoured. Given the nature of such an ability I fully plan on eating any monsters we can find before we reach our base.

The problems as I see it are:

1) Summoning undead has nothing to do with Familiars. Familiars is a key word reserved for the monster tamer ability as it is for creatures that have been caught and tamed by magical means. Summoning undead is a creaure creating ability, and later days show Dhammi creating large armies of skeletons and ghosts, not a measly 12. It seems the translation has combined two different abilities.

2) Why does Rou suddenly switch from talking about Dhammi's abilities to acting like he's the one getting the benefit of God of the underworld? Shouldn't the lines be rearranged and transitions added to show clearly when Rou has started talking about his own abilities instead of the current switching back and forth?