Talk:Day 101-110/Day 107/@comment-116.240.159.243-20150118133720

Goodness me, there is a lot to go through, I feel sorry for the translators ;-; keep up the great work! I went through the first portion and fixed the spelling and grammar that I could (There are bits that I could have made sound more English-written but I decided to leave most of bits because the translator(s?) put it that way)

Although there was one paragraph ("Their eyes burned with fire. Seeing that I snapped out of my blood lust, something that seemed to be detected by the two, though their guard wasn't let down, though their staggered gasping did not get past me.") which had me rather confused, this would most likely need refinement from a translator's point of view, because I don't know what the alternate words could be, I can only guess at the punctuation.

Sorry, I only speak English, so I don't know what the author was trying emphasize, because there was 2 ways of reading it used at the same time, thus colliding endlessly, haha.