Thread:Obarou/@comment-25978970-20180225230149/@comment-26955555-20180305115018

Hi,

Day 221:

I think you can change this "The natural enclosure model can be easily explained as a dungeon that has its exterior and interior separated by a special area called a 【Border Place】, turning it into a huge 【Boundary Range】 of which the entire interior became a dungeon."

to this instead "The natural enclosure model can be easily explained as a dungeon that has its exterior and interior separated by a special area called a 【Border Place/Boundary Range】, isolating and turning the interior into a huge dungeon."

Day 223:

【Tayu of Night Wind】--> 【Tayu of The Night Wind】, I don't think you have to change Tayu, but I'll mention just in case, Tayus are high ranking Geishas

For the most part the names translations are done well, though this was just a quick check, so I may have missed something.

When I get here later, that may change though, at that time I will inform you.

~Obarou