Talk:Day 151-160/@comment-26361875-20150507195843/@comment-26011007-20150507204522

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'afterwards, they' not 'afterwords the' as the phrase 'the started to' is incredibly awkward (it needs a person performing or receiving the action, whether direct or indirect), 'behind the scenes activities' to 'covert activities' just for less wordiness/more normalcy, 'in a so short time' to 'in such a short time', intact in one word

It comes off as the translation includes most of the original sentence details, nice