Talk:Day 141-150/Day 149/@comment-124.83.30.57-20160526073140/@comment-124.83.30.57-20160526094207

Quivering IS correct. However, the placement of the words is switched around. Water comes first, than Quiver. So I suggest Tremor since Water Tremor sounds better to my ear than Water Quiver. It's like calling an earthquake a quaking earth. I mean, technically correct, but still. That's not to say some words can't be inverted, but it's important to know what to give focus. Does his god rule over water that's quaking or does he rule over the quaking of water? I know, I know. I'm being overtly tedious here and I doubt anyone else cares, but I like to get into the specifics of these things.

Darkness Keeper or Darkness Protector doesn't make sense. Leaving aside that it's missing the kanji 士 that would let it be treated as something a person would do (守 alone does not translate to Protector, you need the 士 to make it mean a person who protects), remember the context; whatever the heroes are heroes of is the aspect their gods rule over. If you wish to emphasize that meaning over obedience, then Dark Protection would be more appropriate. But Protector or Keeper are just incorrect to use.

Sounds chuuni-ish enough to me! Also, I find it the most appropriate since it describes both her role in battle (a defensive wall for others) while leaving open the idea that she may possess actually abilities to create a fort of wood through magic. It's important to consider the imagery the words give off. Fortress would be something I'd use for the Rock Hero. Something solidly built. While for the Wood Hero, the image she gives is more of a defender rather than a tank, if you get my meaning.