Talk:Day 61-70/@comment-26018118-20150705033818/@comment-4784862-20150705144035

It's actually " At any rate, I wonder if Father Elf-san manipulated the information, I'm grateful if so."

The wording isn't really bad...but...it does feel like it's too much for a simple comma.

I'd say something like "At any rate, I wonder if Father Elf-san manipulated the information. If that's the case, I'm grateful." or something along those lines.

That's just me, though. ^^