Talk:Day 111-120/@comment-25978970-20150210205100/@comment-186.225.50.186-20150210223752

Good Chapter.

Something sounds strange in "I took the laser swords in my *head*, and cut the head off of the alien general in case he could survive to be rescued. The bastard at least gets to die."


 * In my hands ? I think something like "I used the laser swords that I had in my hands to cut...." (as he couldnt move). Just saying he took the swords in his hands makes it look like he reached for, and got the sword (I get it that he was floating and thus had no way to direct himself, and not paralised)