Talk:Day 151-160/@comment-4784862-20150513191449/@comment-4784862-20150514062440

Day 158 edited and put up.

Biggest change is probably to one of the abilities Rou learns, although there were a variety of grammatical changes, as well.

After consulting with someone who understands japanese, I changed 【God’s Artificial Body from an Unknown Land 】 to 【Divinely-Forged Form of the Otherworlder】, because it flows better, sounds better and is more accurate (was the one in particular Mistelone wanted me to look at, heh). Went with "Divine" instead of "God" because even though one specific God prepared the body, there are many gods in this series, so "Divine" just seemed to fit better in this instance. ^^

TO DAY 159~ (Maybe tomorrow~)