Talk:Day 151-160/@comment-26361875-20150507195843/@comment-26011007-20150507202734

first half of 158 edits for you, if you want to improve your English. Mind you, I'm American so the grammar rules and colloguial sayings will very for different places.

vouch not wouch, choked not choke as the rest of the day is in past tense, 'unknown' works better as a simpel adjective than 'not known to me' right infront of its noun, wasting not wating, are the ones  I saw before just wanting to read. A general note I noticed, minor spelling issues, and there's an apostrophe with the s on the end of prepositions and such. For exmple, thats==> that's.

All in all, your written English is decent (or asm's, can't tell the difference), especially for a foreigner I think. But more importantly, thanks for the new translated days! ^D^