Talk:Day 201-210/@comment-159.147.50.15-20151001173629

Went to check things on day 202 and found that clearly Jp->Rus->Eng translation is not a very good move.

For starters, this whole sentence:

But it is in the water that you find the more terrible monsters. Due to their malevolence you can’t let your guard down a bit. This is the effect of the [Divine Water Spirit].

should be something on the lines (not totally accurate, but better than the former):

However, since in the water lurk more dreadful monsters, going there it's not a good idea. I can see the [Demigod] intention of "don't be negligent, even for a bit".

There are many more parts, but I have not the time for it. Also, the things he find go on a single list separated by commas:

[Ship’s Bilge-water Treasure Leek] -> [Red Jewel Onion] (the author does indeed use the kanji for "bilge water", but that's most likely a typo, as "bilge water" and "red" share a reading (but not the one assigned as ruby, which is exclusive for "red"). Perhaps "Ruby onion". [Steel Scales Fish] -> [Steel-scaled Arowana ], from the lakes around ten-odd meters wide (not centimeters, eit's the pond where he fishes, not the fish))

[Silver Scales Fish] -> [Silver-scaled Arapaima ] from the lakes around a hundred of meters wide (there's a typo here as the second katakana shouldn't be there; it says PISURARUKU instead of PIRARUKU, Japanese name for arapaimas)

[Gold Scales Fish] -> [Golden-scaled Coelacanth ] from the lakes around several hundreds of meters wide (once again a typo since it says SHIIRAKASU instead of SHIIRAKANSU]

[Lord of the Great Fish Lake "Great Catch"] -> [Lord of the Great Lake: Big Catfish ] from the Great Lake (the word for "lord" is "fish lord", a Japanese term for the biggest fish in a pond or stream)

So:

Additionally, you can not only hunt monsters, but you can also go treasure hunting and collect very rare items, found only in the dungeons, in great number here. This place is particularly bountiful. For example, growing on small islands is the [Golden Carrot].

Another such item is [Ship’s Bilge-water Treasure Leek] which grows in depths of at least 500 meters on the bottom of the lake.

Caught in the lakes are:

Steel Scales Fish, which are 10+ cm long.

Eating the Steel Scales Fish are the Silver Scales Fish, which are up to 100 cm.

Eating the Silver Scales Fish are the Gold Scales Fish, which are a few hundred cm in size.

Eating the Gold Scales Fish is the Boss of the Lake, [Lord of the Great Fish Lake "Great Catch"].

becomes:

There items I could harvest this time were of many kinds.

Foodstuff that exhibit a wide variety of special effects, starting with the "Golden carrot" that grew hidden in the few plots of land, the "Ruby Onions" of over 500 meters in diameter found inside wooden sunken ships at the bottom of the lake, "Steel-scaled Arowanas" that could be fished from the ten-odd meters wide lakes, "Silver-scaled Arapaimas" pulled in from the hundred-odd meters wide lakes by using Steel-scaled Arowanas as bait, "Golden-scaled Coelacanths" pulled in from the several hundred meters wide lakes by using Silver-scaled Arapaimas as bait, or a catfish so huge you'd want to call it the Dungeon Master, pulled in from the Great Lake by using Golden-scaled Coelacanths as bait, the "Lord of the Great Lake: Big Catfish".