Talk:Day 71-80/Day 78/@comment-4784862-20160517142426

Made various edits when I put up the "newest" version of this. Here's the list of the "major" ones:


 * “Double-Headed Wolf (Orthros)” -> "Orthros"...it's already described as a double headed wolf before naming it, and this is obviously an allusion to Orthrus (though the katakana used is Orthros instead)...the two-headed dog from mythology.
 * Changed the line about "the other Ogres" to be "others in the Ogre class"...because it later mentions Dhammi, and others. Plus, it says right in the same line that he means those who have ranked up twice. Aside from Rou and Kichi, there are only 4 who have ranked up twice I believe...and these are Sei, E, Sato, and Mi. ^^ This was also mentioned by that anon below, heh.
 * Changed "Gods Era Dungeon" to "Age of the Gods Dungeon" because this is a dungeon CLASSIFICATION, and not "a dungeon from the era of the gods". I'm pretty sure if a god created a NEW dungeon in any of the current story, it would also be classified in this way. ^^
 * Vampiric Exploitation -> Vampirephilia...because THAT IS WHAT THE AUTHOR NAMED IT. The "Vampiric Exploitation" was the kanji UNDER the Ruby, and therefore Vampirephilia is what it SHOULD be called.
 * Changed Job - Axeman and Job - Spearman to Job - Master Axeman/Spearman...because in their ability descriptions it mentions they are a superior version of "Job - Axeman" and "Job - Spearman".
 * "Same Race Killing" -> "Familicide". While the original is technically correct, Familicide makes more sense in this case...considering there's also things like Fatricide, etc. which are specific types of killing. ^^
 * "Kogetsusen (Iai)" -> "Crescent Flash" ...because I don't get why they tried to give THIS PARTICULAR one a name, when the kanji can actually be translated properly. I get the "Iai" part, but there's probably quite a few who won't understand that anyway...even if they have heard it used before. ^^ I realize this sounds hypocritical because of the next ability's name...but...that one is a nightmare, whereas this one wasn't, imo. If you think about it...if you were to say this out loud, Crescent Flash would make just as much sense as Kogetsusen...but the ability following it would sound better as "Chiyari Hyakka"...which is why I left that alone. ^^
 * 【Job - Kensei (Sword Saint)】 -> 【Job - Master Swordsman】 ...c'mon, if you look at the kanji together THAT'S WHAT IT SAYS. You only get Sword Saint if you translate them separately...they are together, though...so... =x

So yeeeeah...I dunno what to say after that, heh. Anyway...I'll do the rest of the ones they've released when I get more time later. =p