Thread:Caudyr/@comment-29246616-20160723145009/@comment-29246616-20160726130608

Well I guess i really made a huge blunder, and please do be blunt so that i know what i need to improve. I understand that i'm still currently not up to task in editing, but i can only blame it on me having to spend 2 years in the army, which sort of made my English really rusty. In any case, i'm open to any opinion and i'm really keen to help since i also want to take this chance to brush up. Additionally, i would like to admit that it's my first time doing editing... the English i have been doing is mostly for official reports.