Talk:Day 21-30/@comment-26438594-20150527061044/@comment-26387503-20150527095436

That'd be nice, charles POV is a mess, but I believe I read somewhere caudyr is gonna start it from scratch someday to make sure its right.

As far as editing goes any improvements are welcome I'm pretty sure. I'm not working with anyone myself. I'm just trying to make it easier to read without making any big changes as I reread it. The retranslations section which is up to around day 70 needs a lot of work grammar wise. Shit, sometimes I get so lost I just leave it be lol.