Talk:Day 121-130/@comment-116.14.67.198-20150318032238/@comment-26013730-20150319012337

@70.193.243.180 : You should point it out there http://pacem.wikia.com/wiki/Ant_Tensei if possible. He can only improve his novel if he gets constructive criticism. After all web novels can be rewritten, White has already done that for one or two chapters if I remember correctly.