Talk:Day 181-190/@comment-173.24.192.74-20150530023436

Day 189:

Thanks for the TL, Champsy! Some quick catches:

Needs rework: "Most people do not have the real to ability a specific level boss that’s enshrined one a specific level, which blocks them from delving to the deeper levels." (Not sure what was meant by "the real to ability a specitic level boss".)

"...to the degree of risk of this." (What is "this" referring to? Its usage here is so ambiguous, I can't even tell if it's meant to be used as an adjective or pronoun, so I can't offer any advice for how to fix it.)

"Moreover, the dungeon monsters were strengthened by 2 levels by the dungeon and are very though, as expected." -> "Moreover, the dungeon strengthened the monsters by 2 levels, making them very tough, as expected."

"...I decided to capture the dungeon in a little bit more." (What is meant by "in a little bit more"?)

Since it's noted the monster listing 'graph needs work, I'll just say that while it is a grammarical/structural mess, I'm not going to bother since White will be coming through any day now with his own version to replace it all. As is, it gets the point across, and that's enough for me.