Talk:Day 171-180/@comment-4784862-20150625043245/@comment-4784862-20150625200808

A couple of quick things before I start applying these corrections...


 * The kanji is literally "Grass", it's not katakana or anything, it's a kanji letter. ^^
 * On the subject of the territories...they take shelter at towns inside the territories of the nobles that he sent that were a part of "Grass"
 * The brackets...when they're used, that's when they show up in the text. When they aren't in the text, they don't show up. That's how it is. That's why sometimes there's mention of ghosts in brackets and at other tiems there isn't.
 * No, the god's divine protection thing doesn't need a bracket, because it's not mentioned in one in the raws. We're basically doing the brackets how they are in the raws. ^^
 * I said A God's Divine Protection, not THE God's Divine Protection. They do have separate blessings, but they're both from A god. ^^
 * If I were to capitalize the "black and purple ghosts", I'd have to separate it into "Black Ghosts and Purple Ghosts" because then it'd be talking about the type of ghosts themselves...rather than ghosts that are black and purple. I'm not necessarily opposed to doing that, though.
 * Any links in the day most likely aren't done by me, because I stopped doing that since White's just going to wipe them out when he edits them, anyway. ^^
 * "As a result, it only took some time before they were all destroyed because there were a large number of them." - Not an author derp. The stuff before mentions their weakness to magical attacks, so it's saying that the only reason it took some time to eliminate them was because of the sheer number of them.