Talk:Day 101-110/Day 101/@comment-30714510-20161210090111

Man...

I hate these little things. And the worst part is that I don't even know if it's a translation problem or yet another case of an author creating something and then not giving it enough attention.

At day 100 we had " As we were going, I noticed pursuers chasing us. Once again, I pressed the two for more information. They told me that these people were some members of the escort team, along with a multitude of thugs.

When the pursuers had caught up, I was urged by the Princess to protect her. " close to the end. Meaning, they had already left the city. But now we start "We departed this morning as planned".

So when did they depart? Day 100? Day 101? I know it's not THAT important, but I think that it's the little things that make a story come to life. And if they're not consistent...

Also, I would've LOVED a little text about Redhead and the others. I mean, it's kind of a big deal. He promised them he'd take them home. He does and tells them "you can choose whether to stay or come back". And then they just hop along for the ride. Even just a few lines with "We already have a home" or something would have been great...