Thread:Oni GiriZ/@comment-4784862-20150621114531/@comment-4784862-20150621141904

I see lots of errors in the final part, but I wouldn't know how to fix them w/o reading ahead of the story from where I'm at...which I'm not going to do. Basically, the errors are likely because of the translations, heh...hard to say, though.

However, there's one I know of right now off the top of my head: Overlord Vajrayaksa Overlord - the first Overlord doesn't need to be there. =p